February 3,2016
Kim Morran Ballabari
Dear Mr.Kenneth Jei Javier Se,
This is my explanation regarding with my absents from your classes because I came late in our subject.
My friends were invited me to go out and play computer games that my parents didn't know that I did not attend to our class but now they already know because i informed them and they immediately take an action to what I have done and they told me you can inform them if I will do it again and here is my parent's number 09215551073.
Please kindly give me one more chance to attend in your class and do my best to pass your subject.
Thank you for your kind consideration.
Yours Truly,
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Kim Morran Ballabari
Student
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Ma.Teresa B. Santos
Parent
Oh, my. I appreciate that you are learning English as a second language. I admire your effort! Your grammar and syntax are not very good yet.
Your first sentence should read:
"This is my explanation regarding my absence from your class because I came in late." The word "with" is out of place and has no meaning here. You misspelled "absence". You write of "classes" as if you missed more than one. The phrase "in our subject" is not needed because you've already said "class".
"My friends were invited me..." "were" is wrong. "My friends invited me..." is correct.
I could go on, but please read it to yourself and see where words are not needed or are the wrong words. Also pay attention to run-on sentences. Simple sentences with one subject and one verb are best. Where you have more than one subject and verb, turn it into two sentences (or more as needed).