I really need help asap with my subjective letter for my NJHS Application. Please answer fast- it is due tomorrow!!
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To the National Juniors Honor Society:
I express my gratitude for selecting me, Sandra Garcia, as a possible member of the National Junior Honors Society (NJHS). I am ecstatic to have this opportunity available since I love participating in service projects and the NJHS aligns with all my long-term academic goals (like going to college and University). For this reason, I will elaborate on the qualities in which I believe brand me to be inducted as a member of the NJHS.
First and foremost, I represent leadership by always supporting my group in group projects. I always put my best efforts forward and make sure all members are participating and are not off task, in order to allow a group to be successful all members must be working and contributing in some way, shape, or form. If I am not the leader I still help out and encourage my fellow peers and give them subtle hints as to help them but I leave it vague enough so that they come to their own decision and think on their part. One group project where my leadership skills have allowed my group to succeed is the Amendment Project that was done last year for Civics. My group won three awards: Video of the Year, Best Male Actor, and Best Guest Star.
Another of the five qualities I possess is scholarship. Since sixth grade I have been enrolled in the Great Explorations in Math (G.E.M.) Program and even though it is challenging at times, I take the challenge and I continue to study and perform well. Also, I have received 5’s on all my standardized tests since fifth grade and similarly I take pride on the fact that I got a perfect score on the Civics EOC. I take my education very seriously and have long-term academic goals.
An additional quality I possess is service and friendliness. I love helping out others and giving back to the community, no matter what. If my friends—or anyone in general—needs help with a certain subject I tutor them or at least help them to the best of my ability and I will not stop helping them until we (myself and the aforementioned person I am helping out) are both certain that I have done my part in assisting them.
Along with service, I am a person with great character. I am kind and honest and I love to help others. Whenever my friends need help with either the smallest issue or something of large importance I am there for them. It is not just my friends, I will help out anyone and everyone. When fellow classmates and peers do not understand the material I go out of my way to help them and make sure they understand the material clearly. I have helped countless peers in various subjects, such as math, history, and guitar/music theory. Correspondingly, I received the first C.A.R.E.S. award in my homeroom- Communication. I believe communication is very important and I would communicate with my peers and encourage them when they were feeling down. I believe that everyone should be positive and motivated in order for a good learning environment.
Finally, the last of the five NJHS qualities I possess is citizenship. I follow the rules and believe that the rules help keep order in my school (Renaissance Charter at Cooper City). A school is a small community, almost like a smaller version of society, and in order to function and for students to learn rules must be followed.
Ultimately as a student, it is not just being a leader or being responsible that is important. It is all of these qualities that not only allow one to become a member of the NJHS, but to be successful as a student. I appreciate the invitation and I hope to become a member of this wonderful society.
note: On the word document I have my conclusion and I have it organized into paragraphs.
I forgot to ask: is it good? Does it need any improvements? Thanks ^^
Well, I can't edit the entire letter here. A couple of hints: Are you being branded like a calf at roundup time? Is that the word you want? "fellow peers" is redundant. "A person with great character" ??? Are you a character actor? Is there a better way to say that? And, again, "fellow classmates" is redundant. "in order for a good learning environment" doesn't make sense; find another way to say that more simply. Overall, simplify and clarify. I'm sure you'll be accepted into the society. Good luck!
I also had trouble with this.
Wish me good luck!!!
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Great job Sandra the only problems you had were that you need to reword some things.
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