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i don't get it either

What feedback did you get from WriteToLearn™ about your comparison-and-contrast essay?

Both Football & Soccer need fields of grass to play on.They both require you to wear uniforms. football is more physical then soccer. In soccer you can't use your hands to handle the ball. In football you need protective gear to protect your body.

In Soccer the field is more bigger. Football is a national sport, Soccer is an international sport. In football theirs a better chance of you getting injured than in soccer. in Football you throw and kick the football. In soccer your feet, knees, & head are the only parts of your body you use to move the ball.

Both contain 11 men on the field. Soccer was invented around Around 476 BC to 221 BC, a sport called cuju was popularly played in China. The name is roughly translated as "kick the ball with foot." FootballIn 1920 the American Professional Football Association was formed. This league changed its name to the National Football League (NFL) two years later, and eventually became the major league of American football. Soccer is an older sport than football.

Okay, so what feedback did you receive on this essay, and how can you apply that feedback?

Compare & Contrasting Soccer & Football

^^^ please do not copy & paste THIS 1 on connexus "WARNING YOU WILL NOT PASS THAT ASSIGNMENT"

you have to write a comparison and contrast in the write to learn and see how you did then write down in the quiz what is your strong suit and which is your bad trait.

Only you can answer this. Feedback, only you can see. You write the weakest one that has the lowest stars and numbers. Then you write the strongest, that has the most stars and numbers. Only you can answer these two questions.

Can you please answer the question I need major help on this.

You need to write an essay and then you know reflect on your feedback. Or you can just ask for a temporary zero

By ask for a temporary zero it is just to give you some time to write the rough draft

These are based off of the essay you should've made in the writetolearn website they link it for you, you need to do your own essay.

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You need to do an essay on write to learn, turn it in then it will give you feedback

Look at writetolearn to see the feedback to answer the question

What you teacher is trying to say is that what is the strongest and the weakest trait out of the ones that you listed on the screen and the they are saying that you need to describe how it is the strongest and the weakest trait that is all you have to do i hope this helps you with that assignment :)

yall cant give an example :)

you guys are lit

Can anybody give a example ?

I NEED HELP PLZ ANYONE

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BROOOOO SOMEONE PLEASE GIVE THE ANSWER I NEED MAJOR HELP!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reflect on the feedback you received from WriteToLearn™ about your persuasive essay. Which traits are strongest in your persuasive essay: ideas, organization, voice, word choice, sentence fluency, and conventions? Provide textual evidence from your essay to support your answer.

Both Football & Soccer need fields of grass to play on.They both require you to wear uniforms. football is more physical then soccer. In soccer you can't use your hands to handle the ball. In football you need protective gear to protect your body.

In Soccer the field is more bigger. Football is a national sport, Soccer is an international sport. In football theirs a better chance of you getting injured than in soccer. in Football you throw and kick the football. In soccer your feet, knees, & head are the only parts of your body you use to move the ball.

Both contain 11 men on the field. Soccer was invented around Around 476 BC to 221 BC, a sport called cuju was popularly played in China. The name is roughly translated as "kick the ball with foot." FootballIn 1920 the American Professional Football Association was formed. This league changed its name to the National Football League (NFL) two years later, and eventually became the major league of American football. Soccer is an older sport than football.

Ohh ok. Compare and contrasting thing that we did before!

What is for number 2

REflect on the feedback you received from writetolearn about your comparison and contrast essay.

Which traits are weakest in your comparison and contrast essay: ideas, organization, voice, word choice, sentence fluency, or conventions?

Provide textual evidence from your essay to support your answer.

How can you improve these elements of your comparison and contrast essay.

I need answers please and I will give y'all reward

I all ready know the first one whats the second one

what reward are you going to give us if we answered the question

there is nothing to give

Number two is

The scooer team is nasty

Wait so what is number two? Is it what Jame said?

Basically all your doing is picking what your good at for the top one which is asking " your strongest" so what you can do without an issue , like i can write in a organized order. Then the other one is asking about your weakest which is something you have an issue working with like i have and issue with word choice.

there was no essay before this but if ur a connexus student u would know what this is.

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