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Which of the following options best demonstrates sentence fluency?
a. The city looked beautiful in that it was lit by the sun while I was walking down the street.
b. Walking down the street in the sunshine, the city looked beautiful.
c. The city looked beautiful as I was walking, lit by the sun, down the street.
d. Walking down the street, I noticed how beautiful the city looked in the sunshine.

Answer is C???

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  1. Not C.

    posted by Writeacher
  2. Ask yourself which one makes sense ...

    1. Did the sun light up the city while you were walking ... ?
    2. Was the city "walking down the street"?
    3. Was your walking "lit by the sun, down the street"?
    4. Was "I" walking down the street ... ?

    posted by Writeacher
  3. A

    posted by Anonymous
  4. I am not sure

    posted by Anonymous

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