Please help me correct my paragraph for spelling, punctuation, sentence structure, and grammar! Mucho gracias!
Esta semana, estoy muy triste. I don' t tiene gusto de considerar a inmigrantes ilegales el invadir de mi país. Estoy aprendiendo español de modo que pueda decirle irme. Cuando veo a inmigrantes ilegales el trabajar en McDonald' s, les digo salir. No tengo gusto de su cultura. No tengo gusto de sus alimentos del spicey. No tengo gusto de su música tonta de la polca. No tengo gusto de sus sombreros divertidos. No me hace feliz de ver esto en América. Ésta no es nuestra cultura. Deseo que cada uno que quiere vivir en mi país aprendería hablar nuestra lengua. Nuestra lengua es inglés, no español. No hablaré español en América, a menos que esté pidiendo que un inmigrante ilegal saliera de nuestro país. Cuando gradúo, quisiera ensamblar a los MinuteMen americanos. Los MinuteMen americanos ayudan a guardar a inmigrantes ilegales fuera de nuestro país. Usted tiene que saber español para ser un agente eficaz del MinuteMan o de la patrulla fronteriza, porque usted necesita decir a los inmigrantes ilegales salir.
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B sure to remove any English; "I don't" in Spanish will be "(Yo) no tengo gusto"...OK we are in trouble here because you did not give the English of what it is you are trying to say. Therefore I can't correct the 2nd sentence. Therre is repetition that you can avoid, instead of repeating "no tengo gusto de..." For example, you could make some of the simple sentences into complex ones.
Please provide the English and try combining some sentences. When you do that, I'll take another look.
Sra
if you meant to say "i don't care for..." when you said "no tengo gusto de...", the correct way would be, "no me importa..."
This week, I am very sad. I don't like to see illegal immigrants invading my country. I am learning Spanish so that I can tell them to leave. When I see illegal immigrants working at McDonald's, I tell them to go away. I don't like their culture. I don't like their spicy food. I don't like their silly polka music. I don't like their funny hats. It doesn't make me happy to see this in America. This is not our culture. I wish that everyone who wants to live in my country would learn to speak our language. Our language is English, not Spanish. I will not speak Spanish in America unless I am asking an illegal immigrant to leave our country. When I graduate, I would like to join the American MinuteMen. The American MinuteMen help keep illegal immigrants out of our country. You have to know Spanish to be an effective MinuteMan or border patrol agent because you need to tell the illegal immigrants to leave.
Here's the corrected paragraph:
"This week, I am very sad. I don't like to see illegal immigrants invading my country. I am learning Spanish so that I can ask them to leave. When I see illegal immigrants working at McDonald's, I tell them to go away. I don't like their culture. I don't like their spicy food. I don't like their silly polka music. I don't like their funny hats. It doesn't make me happy to see this in America. This is not our culture. I wish that everyone who wants to live in my country would learn to speak our language. Our language is English, not Spanish. I will not speak Spanish in America unless I am asking an illegal immigrant to leave our country. When I graduate, I would like to join the American MinuteMen. The American MinuteMen help keep illegal immigrants out of our country. You have to know Spanish to be an effective MinuteMan or border patrol agent because you need to tell the illegal immigrants to leave."