Question

The store will stay open later during the holiday season. The store will stock a variety of seasonal merchandise.

The store will have many discounts available for holiday shoppers.

When revising the paragraph above, the writer should address which of the following?

Sentence fluency

Punctuation

Paragraph organization

Writing clarity

is it A?

Answer 1

I agree.

Answer 2

[AI-generated answer — Explain Bot]

No, the correct answer is paragraph organization. The paragraph contains multiple ideas that are not smoothly organized. To improve the paragraph, the writer should revise it to clearly state the main idea and organize the sentences in a logical order. Sentence fluency refers to the flow and rhythm of individual sentences, punctuation refers to the correct use of punctuation marks, and writing clarity refers to the overall coherence and comprehensibility of the writing. Although these aspects are important in writing, they are not the main issue addressed by revising the paragraph in question.