What is been written wrong in the following sentence " i am please asking for airtime please "

Why is "please" in there twice? Which one should be removed?

Capitalization?

Punctuation??

Is this the right way of put the sentence " I am please! asking for airtime. "

No.

I am asking for airtime, please.

I AM ASKING YOU FOR MY AIRTIME PLEASE1

The sentence "i am please asking for airtime please" contains a couple of errors. First, the word "please" is used twice, which is redundant and unnecessary. Secondly, the word "please" is being used in the wrong context. Let me explain how to correct it:

To correct the sentence, we can remove the redundant use of "please" and replace it with the appropriate word. Assuming you want to politely ask for airtime, a better way to express it would be:

"I kindly request for airtime."

In this corrected sentence, we have removed the repetition of "please" and replaced it with the more appropriate word "kindly," which conveys politeness.