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Is this a good topic sentence for a paragraph?

In A Raisin in the Sun, Lena Younger is the nurturing, morale character who
keeps the Younger family in line and earns your respect in the story.

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asked by Anna
  1. It looks good to me, but I'd change "your" to "the reader's."

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  2. Except for the word "your," it's a good topic sentence.

    Be sure to omit all forms of "you" in your papers unless you are quoting someone.

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  3. Please correct the spelling of "morale" to "moral."

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