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Rewrite the sentences focusing on grammar: Inclusive Language—Quoting from Biased Material

Back in the 1400s, the laws governing the people were quite specific: “All men shall tithe 10% to the church and pay taxes every six months. All men can attend school until they are 16 years of age.”

There is nothing to change here.

It's a quote from the 1400s. We can't change history.

thank you. Plesae let me know if this is a good sentence using:Inclusive Language—Talking about People with Disabilities and Disease

People who were vision impaired went downtown for a national conference.

You're welcome.

That looks like a factual sentence. I don't see any other way of stating it.

The sentence "People who were vision impaired went downtown for a national conference" can be considered inclusive in terms of talking about people with disabilities and disease. However, to make it even more inclusive, you could rephrase it as "Individuals with vision impairments attended a national conference downtown." This version emphasizes the individuality and includes a more person-first language approach.