Can someone check if my sentences for my story are written correctly.. (punctuation, word placings. everything..)
1. Cette semaine, j'ai regarde deux films.
(This week, I watched two films.)
2.) L'un des films s'appelle Insurgent.
(One of the film is called Insurgent.)
3.) Je l'ai bien aimé.
(I liked it.)
4.) Aujourd'hui, je vais au parc avec (my cousins).
(Today, I'm going to the park with my cousins.)
I'll send this to one of our French experts, SraJMcGin.
Thankyou Ms.Sue
1. ONly one error and that is the accent aigu on the Past Participle = regardé.
2. good
3. If "it" is masculine singular you are correct. BUT if it is feminine singular, there is agreement of the Past Participle with a preceding direct object and it would be "aimé."
Sra (aka Mme)
What about the last sentence?
Sorry! I never saw #4!
4. mes cousins (male, male & female) or cousines (feminine only)
Sra (aka Mme)
Good thing I came back before I stopped for the evening?!!
Thankyou so much.
I also hoped if you could check this one for me before you stop. I would appreciate it.
1. ) This week , I went to Disney World.
2. ) I went to the water parks.
3.) I was all soaked.
4.) Today, I'm going to relax.
5.) Tomorrow, I will be going home.
1. ) Cette semaine , je suis allé à Disney World .
2. ) Je suis allé aux parcs aquatiques .
3. ) Je suis tout trempé .
4. ) Aujourd'hui, je vais vous détendre .
5. ) Demain , je vais rentrer à la maison .
If not, flag this for tmrw cuz you helped a lot! I'll be back to ask more questions.
Monday: sorry but I had to shut down right after checking #4.
1. I need to know if you are female because then the Passé Composé would be "je suis allé
2. same for the verb
3. Because you said "I was" that requires the Past Tense and l'im parfait is best = J'étais tout trempé (or trempé if you are a girl)
4. OOPS! What you said is: Today I'm going to relax you! Instead, you need: Aujourd'hui je vais me détendre. This is a Reflexive Verb (to relax ONEself, and your sentence says "to relax myself.)
5. Another option is the true future = J'irai (I will go) and another option for "home" is "chez moi."
Sra (aka Mme)
I saved this and will check back ater to see your new questions.
Sra (aka Mme)
How would I write it for both female and male?
I did write, je suis allé (for the female) .. or am I looking over it...
Fixed sentences:
1. ) Cette semaine , je suis allé à Disney World . (female) I thought I did write that though? I got confused.
2. ) Je suis allé (à) aux parcs aquatiques . (what do you mean same for the verb? or is this right, now...
3. ) J'étais tout trempé.
4. ) Aujourd'hui je vais me détendre.
( I changed the vous to me.)
5. ) Demain , je vais rentrer à la maison . (Is this sentence still right?) or should it be...
Demain, j'irai rentrer à chez moi.