Would someone be willing to proof read my English essay? I proof read it but I don't know if I got all the mistakes.

We can't proofread or edit here, sorry. Go over it again yourself and look for mistakes you made the first time.

If you find something you are unsure about, post a question about it and we'll be glad to try to help.

Do you know of any sites that will proof read it I have read it a couple of times but I want to make sure I get it right

I don't think you can get it proofread for free. But I've seen sites advertised that will proofread it for a fee.

Only sites that charge you quite a bit of money per page ... however ...

You can also either read it aloud to someone else or have someone else read it aloud to you! The latter works really well!)

If your reading goes smoothly, that is fine. However, wherever you "stumble" in your reading, other people are likely to have a problem in reading your material. Those "stumbles" indicate areas that need revising.

Once you have made your revisions, repeat the process above. Good papers often require many drafts.

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And here are some websites that will give you more good ideas to try:

http://teachro.publiccomputingservices.org/writing/proofreading.htm

http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/composition/proofing.htm

Certainly! I can provide some guidance on proofreading your English essay. Here's a step-by-step explanation of how you can effectively proofread your own work:

1. Take a break: After completing your essay, step away from it for a while, whether it's a few hours or even a day. This will help you approach it with a fresh perspective.

2. Read aloud: Read your essay aloud to yourself. This technique can help you catch errors that might otherwise go unnoticed. Pay attention to sentence structure, grammar, and flow.

3. Focus on one aspect at a time: When proofreading, it's helpful to focus on specific elements in each pass. For example, you could first check for grammar mistakes, then move on to spelling errors, and finally concentrate on sentence structure and clarity.

4. Use spell check and grammar tools: Take advantage of the spell check and grammar check features in your word processing software. However, note that these tools may not catch all mistakes, so don't solely rely on them.

5. Review punctuation: Pay close attention to punctuation marks, such as commas, periods, and quotation marks. Double-check that they are used correctly and consistently throughout your essay.

6. Check for consistency: Ensure that your writing style and tone remain consistent throughout the essay. Watch out for any inconsistencies in your tense, voice, or formatting.

7. Seek another set of eyes: While you've done your best to proofread, it's always helpful to have someone else review your essay as well. They may catch mistakes that you overlooked.

8. Proofread multiple times: The more times you proofread your essay, the higher the chances of catching errors. Dedicate enough time, ideally proofreading on different days, to give yourself a fresh perspective each time you review.

Remember, proofreading takes time, and it's normal to miss some mistakes. Stay patient and persistent, and you'll be able to catch the majority of errors in your essay.