I am writing an essay on living on a farm vs living in the city my thesis statement needs help any suggestions?
The factors that a person should consider before choosing between the two are environments, lifestyle, and family values.
okay.. this is the thesis statement I have come up with. I this better?
The differences between farm life and city life are striking and deserve thorough examination.
That's just a statement, not a thesis statement.
Read through the different pairs here to see how to write a good thesis:
http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/thesistatement.html
I'm not sure what "family values" have to do with a choice of where to live. It depends on how you define "family values." If the extended family lives in one locale, you may want to stay where they are. Otherwise, "values" have little to do with where one lives, per se.
In any case, this is not a thesis statement. Type this site into your browser. I think it will help you.
writingcenter.unc.edu › Handouts
I am looking at the above site now. I said family values because I talk about family relationships, family size, and family time and the differences between families in the city and on the farm.
Okay. As long as you make your case cogently, you're fine. "Family values" often dredges up religious beliefs and social issues in today's parlance. Cities tend to be more politically liberal, so strict or right-wing conservatives may be more comfortable in more rural areas, and vice versa. But valuing family relationships doesn't vary from the city mouse to the country mouse just because of where they live.
Your thesis statement is a good starting point, but it could be more specific and concise. Here's a revised suggestion:
"Before deciding between living on a farm or in the city, individuals should carefully assess the impact of factors such as environmental factors, lifestyle preferences, and family values on their overall well-being and satisfaction."
To develop this thesis statement further, you can consider incorporating specific comparisons or contrasts related to each factor (environment, lifestyle, family values). Additionally, consider how these factors may affect various aspects of life, such as personal happiness, career opportunities, social connections, or physical and mental health. This will provide a clearer direction for your essay.