In a well organized essay, analyze the language and rhetorical devices the narrator uses to convey his attitude toward Hester and toward women in general

I felt that my previous thesis was not strong at all and I would like to change it and make it better.

Through the use of rhetorical devices and language, the narrator conveys that Hester and women are strong, admirable, and deserved to be respected.

The narrator conveys his attitude towards Hester through descriptions of her during her isolation. Based on his observations of Hester, the narrator then makes a generalization that women become oppresses because of their over reliance on emotions.

By analyzing Hawthorne's use on language and rhetorical devices, we can establish that the narrator holds women in high esteem, which is found within the passage, in which he concludes that women are powerful and strong and deserve to be respected.

I don't know. I want a strong thesis statement but none seem to show that. Please help come up with a strong thesis statement.

I like the first one. The others are too wordy.

This is an excellent site for thesis statements.

http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/thesistatement.html

Sure, I can help you come up with a strong thesis statement. Based on the information you provided about the narrator's attitude towards Hester and women in general, a potential thesis statement could be:

"Through careful analysis of the language and rhetorical devices employed by the narrator, it becomes evident that the narrator holds Hester and women in high regard, portraying them as strong, admirable, and deserving of respect despite societal expectations and oppression."

This thesis statement highlights the narrator's positive attitude towards Hester and women, and it also suggests that the narrator challenges societal norms and beliefs regarding female roles and qualities.