Could this be a good thesis? Could you please help me? In today's society many middle class people argue why they can not build wealth could this be because of wrong choices?
Could be...in a thesis? The moon is either made of green cheese, or not...arguing it "could be" seems a little avoiding a detailed argument with evidence.
I have issues with the word "many" also.
Verdict: Many students mess up the thesis by arguing they cannot do it could be because they have not thought out their arguments well, in detail.
Think on this: What do you want to say? No generalizing, no vacillating. What is the point you want to make?
You had two responses when you asked this earlier today. Both of us said it was not a good thesis.
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Why did you post this again?
Yes, your thesis statement is a good starting point for exploring the reasons behind the struggles of middle-class individuals in building wealth. However, in order to make your thesis statement more effective, you might consider rephrasing it to make it clearer and more concise. Here's a suggested revision:
"Many middle-class individuals in today's society face challenges in building wealth, leading to debates on whether these difficulties are a result of the choices they make."
To develop your thesis statement further, you could then analyze various factors that might contribute to the struggles of middle-class individuals in building wealth. Some possible avenues to explore could include:
1. Economic factors: Investigate how income stagnation, rising costs of living, or limited access to resources and opportunities affect the ability of the middle class to accumulate wealth.
2. Education and human capital: Examine the role of education, skills, and qualifications in wealth accumulation, and explore how disparities in access to quality education may hinder wealth-building prospects.
3. Structural and systemic issues: Consider how social and economic structures, such as taxation policies, wealth concentration, or systemic barriers to social mobility, could affect the wealth-building capacity of the middle class.
4. Financial literacy and investment decisions: Explore the influence of financial knowledge and decision-making on wealth accumulation, and whether a lack of financial literacy contributes to unsuccessful wealth-building endeavors.
By delving into these areas, you can provide a comprehensive analysis of the factors contributing to the struggles faced by the middle class in building wealth. Remember to support your thesis with evidence and incorporate counterarguments or alternative perspectives for a well-rounded discussion.