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How can this thesis statement be written better?

Rap music is the best ever.

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  1. http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/thesistatement.html

    Read through all the examples here -- the bad and the good -- and focus on the far better ones (the second one in each pair).

    Then try again.

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