At the fair, not only can I eat tasty food, but I can also see awesome fireworks. need help making sure its a parallel structure and has linking words

Yes, your sentence is fine.

To ensure parallel structure and the inclusion of linking words in your sentence, you can revise it as follows:

At the fair, not only can I enjoy tasty food, but I can also witness spectacular fireworks.

Explanation:

1. Parallel Structure: In a parallel structure, the items within a list or the clauses within a sentence should follow a consistent grammatical pattern. In your original sentence, "eat tasty food" and "see awesome fireworks" do not have the same structure. By changing "eat" to "enjoy," we establish a parallel structure with "see."

2. Linking Words: Linking words help to connect ideas within a sentence. In this case, we can use "but" as a coordinating conjunction to show a contrast between the two activities you can do at the fair. The parallel structure allows us to use the same linking word ("but") for both activities.

Revised Sentence: At the fair, not only can I enjoy tasty food, but I can also witness spectacular fireworks.