I need help with my research paper outline.(ARE THERE ANY MISTAKES?)
According to (author/source)Michael Martinez and Jaqueline Hurtado(Date 2014/11/15) the main idea about this subject is the parents does not believe in what the government said and that they are not doing anything for the search of forty three missing students.
According to Michael Martinez and Jaqueline Hurtado (2014), the parents do not believe the government is doing anything in the search for the forty-three missing students.
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