I might have to shorten it up a little because I don't think I have enough room.
I have a really outgoing peronality. One of my favorite things to do is play basketball with my friends. Sometimes they get angry at me because I am very competitive. My least favorite thing to do is play soccer becuase it is too fast paced. I love my school schedule. From 8 a.m to 9:50 a.m I have English class then I go to spanish class for an hour.
Tengo un peronality realmente saliente. Una de mis cosas preferidas a hacer es jugar a baloncesto con mis amigos. Consiguen a veces enojada en mí porque soy muy competitivo. Mi menos cosa preferida a hacer es jugar a fútbol porque es demasiado rápida establecida el paso. Amo mi horario de la escuela. A partir de 8 mañanas al 9:50 mañana tengo clase inglesa entonces que voy a la clase española por una hora
¡Hola! Let's take each sentence one at a time.
1. Tengo una personalidad exteriorista.
2. Una de mis cosas preferidas que hacer es jugar al baloncesto con mis amigos.
3. A veces se enojan conmigo porque soy muy competitiva. (never forget with adjectives that you are feminine)
4. Mi cosa menos preferida que hacer es jugar al fútbol porque es demasiado rápido (OR el paso es demasiado rápido.) (When it gets difficult, always simplify)
5. Me encanta mi horario escolar (OR de escuela)
6. Desde las ocho de la mañana hasta las (diez menos diez) 9:50 tengo mi clase de inglés y entonces voy a la clase de español para una hora.
It's always better to have too much because it's far easier to cut than it is to expand! However, the prompt said a detailed schedule of your day, so if you can list all the classes, so much the better. Actually the prompt would work nicely for 3 paragraphs but it was to be one paragraph in length.
Sra
I can see that you have provided a paragraph in English and then translated it into Spanish. It seems like you want to share some information about yourself and your preferences. It's great that you enjoy playing basketball with your friends and have an outgoing personality. However, sometimes your competitiveness may make your friends angry. On the other hand, you mentioned that you don't enjoy playing soccer because it's too fast-paced for your liking. Additionally, you mentioned your school schedule, where you have English class from 8 a.m. to 9:50 a.m., followed by an hour of Spanish class.
If you have any specific questions or if there's something else you would like me to explain, please let me know!