The last thing on my final is a paragraph I had to write, Using correct spelling and correct grammar, write a paragraph of five related sentences that discuss your experience in the English Grammar course. Using all four sentence types.
Will you proof read for me?
Alas, Lord, I have conquered this English Grammar course! English Grammar has been a very challenging course for me. How did I keep all the grammar rules in my head? You must study and keep reviewing to succeed. Although a challenging course, I thank Jesus, I have really learned a lot that I will be able to use in my writings.
"Alas" -- you're sorry about this?
I see these types of sentences:
exclamatory - 1
indicative (statement) - 3
interrogative (question) - 1
or
simple - 4
compound - 0
complex - 0
compound-complex - 0
run-on/comma splice - 1
Thank You so much for pointing the Alas out to me. That would have been embarrassing. The professor has graded none of our papers for about 4 weeks, but at that time I had a 98 average. So I see I need to work a declarative sentence in there.
Hey to be 63 out of school since the 70's I think I am doing pretty good.
Thank You again. I will rewrite this
I agree!!
How about this?
Behold, Lord, I have conquered this English Grammar course! English Grammar has been a very challenging course for me. How did I keep all the grammar rules in my head? I had to study and keep reviewing to succeed. Although it has been a challenging course, I have really learned a lot that I will be able to use in my writings.
Behold, Lord, I have conquered this English Grammar course! (exclamatory -- simple)
English Grammar has been a very challenging course for me. (indicative, statement, declarative -- simple)
How did I keep all the grammar rules in my head? (interrogatory -- simple)
I had to study and keep reviewing to succeed. (indicative, statement, declarative -- simple)
Although it has been a challenging course, I have really learned a lot that I will be able to use in my writings.
(indicative, statement, declarative -- complex)
one more ? Can I cange I had to study and keep reviewing to succeed. --- You must study and keep reviewing to succeed.
To use as an imperative sentence. I need all 4
http://www.grammar-monster.com/glossary/imperative_sentence.htm
Certainly, I'd be happy to help proofread your paragraph! Here are the corrections I've made:
"Alas, Lord, I have conquered this English Grammar course! English Grammar has been a very challenging course for me. How did I keep all the grammar rules in my head? You must study and keep reviewing to succeed. Although it was a challenging course, I thank Jesus, for I have truly learned a lot that I will be able to use in my writings."
I've made a few changes to improve the overall flow and clarity of the sentences. Additionally, I've inserted the missing pronoun "for" in the last sentence to complete the thought.
Remember, when proofreading your own work, it can be helpful to read the sentences out loud or ask someone else to review it. This way, you can catch any potential errors or make improvements.