"Write a monologue revealing the unspoken thoughts and feelings of one of the characters in "Everything Stuck to Him." Use the personal pronoun "I." Choose one of the following scenes to step into the character's mind: a) the girl sitting up alone with the crying baby, b) the boy sitting alone in the car, or c) the women looking at her finger nails after hearing the story."
I have read this story a few times, but I am having trouble figuring out how to start this monologue. Could you perhaps give me an idea of what the best way to start off would be? Preferably with scene "c"?
Thank you for your time and help!
Of course! When starting a monologue, it's important to set the stage and establish the character's perspective. Since you have chosen scene "c" where the woman is looking at her fingernails after hearing the story, you can begin the monologue by reflecting on the emotions and thoughts that arise from that moment.
To help you get started, you could consider beginning the monologue with a self-reflective statement about the character's appearance or an observation about her state of mind. For example:
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I sit here, staring at my fingers, not because they hold any particular interest, but rather as a feeble attempt to divert my attention from the whirlwind of emotions that have ensnared me. The simple act of gazing at my painted nails becomes a refuge, a desperate escape from grappling with the weight of the story that has just unfolded around us.
Yet, as I inspect each nail with feigned interest, my mind races, struggling to comprehend the depths of that haunting tale. It etches itself onto every fiber of my being, leaving an indelible mark that even nail polish cannot conceal.
I find myself caught between the realm of disbelief and the poignant realization that this is not merely a work of fiction. This story strikes a chord deep within, unraveling the tapestry of my own experiences, the countless tales of invisible battles I've fought, and the struggles I've disguised behind enigmatic smiles and seemingly flawless nails.
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Remember, the beginning of a monologue sets the tone and draws the audience or reader into the character's internal world. By starting with a reflective statement like above, you can establish the emotional landscape and set the stage for the unspoken thoughts and feelings that will be revealed throughout the monologue.
Feel free to customize and expand upon this starter to suit the particular thoughts and emotions you imagine the character may be experiencing. Happy writing!