I need help constructing a concluding sentence for my paragraphs. 1. Allusion (The fault dear Brutus is not in our stars but in ourselves)
2. Definition (we are the defenders of freedom wherever it continues to exist in the world, but we cannot defend abroad by deserting it at home)
3. Repetition of the Julius Caesar quote.
I googled several places and still don't know what to do...help!!
do you need the meaning of:
we are the defenders of freedom wherever it continues to exist in the world, but we cannot defend abroad by deserting it at home
No
I just have to say how those three achieve pointing out the irrational fear of Communism. I'm not sure on the repetition but i just need an ending statement for these three paragraphs.
"how those three achieve pointing out the irrational fear of Communism"
Use that wording somehow.
Also --
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/composition/endings.htm
http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/conclude.html
http://nutsandbolts.washcoll.edu/ending.html
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I am not sure how to help you with this if I don't know how your paragraohs are constructed or what key points they are highlighting.
So you need an ending line relating to
1.)allusion
2.) and 3.) I don't understand
I used allusion using the quote from Julius Caesar saying we need to take the blame for our own faults / We are our choices. I don't know how to end that paragraph and lead to the next one on Definition saying what our place was and what we were supposed to do. (defend freedom wherever it exists in the world)
To construct a concluding sentence for your first paragraph on allusion, you can tie it back to the theme of the irrational fear of Communism. One possible concluding sentence could be: "Through the allusion to Julius Caesar's quote, 'The fault, dear Brutus, is not in our stars but in ourselves,' we are reminded that the true blame for societal problems lies within our own choices, shedding light on the irrationality of attributing these fears solely to external factors like Communism."
For your second paragraph on definition, you can emphasize the importance of defending freedom both at home and abroad in order to combat irrational fears. Here's a suggestion for a concluding sentence: "By recognizing that we cannot effectively defend freedom abroad without safeguarding it at home, we challenge the irrationality of allowing fear to compromise the very values we seek to protect."
Regarding your third paragraph on repetition of the Julius Caesar quote, you can use it as a reinforcement of the previous points made. Here's a possible concluding sentence: "By repeating the poignant words of Julius Caesar, we underscore the need to confront irrational fear head-on, unearthing the truth that it is not external forces but our own choices that shape our future."
Remember, these are just suggestions, and you can tailor them to fit your paragraphs and overall essay structure. Additionally, make sure to check for proper grammar and coherence when constructing your concluding sentences.