I'm sorry but after asking for help and looking up several websites on how to write a really good thesis statement, I don't think I can make one. So I am asking can you please help me by writing it. I tried but I came up with three terrible ones.
In “When Grizzlies Walked Upright”, the bears relation changed before and after the introduction of the female into their clan, and both the bears and female contributed to their community.
The bears relation with each other changed completely before and after the female arrive but both the bears and the female made contributions to their community.
With the introduction of the female, it changed the bears relation significantly from before and the bears and female help make contributions to their community.
So please help me
Frankly, in the version I read, no difference was noted.
Of course, I'm here to help! Writing a strong thesis statement can be challenging, but I can certainly assist you in crafting one for your topic.
Based on the information you provided, a potential thesis statement for your essay on "When Grizzlies Walked Upright" could be:
"The introduction of the female bear in 'When Grizzlies Walked Upright' profoundly impacts the dynamics of the bear clan, leading to a transformation in their relationships and collective contributions to the community."
To create this thesis statement, I slightly modified your first attempt and integrated the key elements of your topic into a clear and concise statement.
Just remember that a good thesis statement should be specific, concise, and focused on the main idea of your essay. It should clearly state your argument and provide a roadmap for the direction of your paper.
I hope this helps! Let me know if you need any further assistance.