this is my second paragraph essay for media bias essay
M.S.N.B.C news articles are known for being conservative. Some of those who write for this TV station seem to have a conservative slant. For some events, they will only mention one side of the argument and slightly mention the other point of view. The article dated January 26, 2007, “Bush: ‘I’m the decision-maker’ on Iraq troops”, mentions only the President Bush’s side of view, but not Army Lt. Gen. David Petraeus’ views. “Our policy is going to be to protect our troops. It makes sense.” All the quotes in the article belong to the president only and each quote represents how the president defends his plan. The writer does not include the responses of General Petraeus and what he thinks about sending his troops to Iraq. At the end, it is also written “Bush also called Philippine President Gloria Macapagal Arroyo to thank her for her support in the global war on terror.” What about the other presidents that do not support Bush?
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Quotation = noun; quote = verb.
Authors, writers, and reporters write these articles, not some amorphous something or somebody out there!
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In your second paragraph, you discuss how some articles from MSNBC are known for being conservative and how some of the writers associated with the TV station seem to have a conservative bias. You also mention that these articles often present only one side of the argument and only slightly mention the opposing point of view.
To further support your argument, you provide an example of an article dated January 26, 2007, titled "Bush: 'I'm the decision-maker' on Iraq troops." In this article, you point out that the writer only mentions President Bush's point of view but does not include the views of Army Lt. Gen. David Petraeus. You highlight that all the quotes in the article are from President Bush, representing how he defends his plan, but General Petraeus' responses are not included.
Additionally, you mention that at the end of the article, the writer states that President Bush called Philippine President Gloria Macapagal Arroyo to thank her for her support in the global war on terror. However, you raise the question of what about other presidents who don't support Bush?
It is important to note that in your paragraph, you should clarify who "they" refers to when mentioning those who write for the TV station. Additionally, you should use the term "quotation" instead of "quote" when referring to the President's statements. Finally, when discussing the writer at the end of your paragraph, it would be more accurate to use the term "author" instead.