correct the ten mistake and write out the paragraph. the best girl at sport in the class is my best friend. last year she won two medals for swimming it was when we had a huge swimming gala at the bath in town. everyone in the lower school was there,and their parents.the noise was so loud that our teacher nearly went deaf there was a race foe all girls in our year my best friend won the race by two whole metres.the last race was for girls and boys.all the girls were screaming for my friend she managed to win by the tips of her fingers.
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The best girl at sports in the class is my best friend.
The best girl at sports in the class is my best friend. Last year, she won two medals for swimming. It was when the had a huge swimming gala at the Bath in Town. Everyone and their parents were there in the lower school. The noise was so loud that our teacher went nearly deaf. There was a race for all the girls in our year. My best friend won the race by two whole metres. The last race was for girls and boys. All the girls were screaming for my friend. She managed to win by the tips of her fingers.
To correct the mistakes and rewrite the paragraph:
"The best girl at sports in the class is my best friend. Last year, she won two medals for swimming. It was during a huge swimming gala at the town's public bath. Everyone in the lower school and their parents were there. The noise was so loud that our teacher nearly went deaf. There was a race for all the girls in our year, and my best friend won the race by a margin of two whole meters. The last race was for both girls and boys. All the girls were cheering for my friend, and she managed to win by the tips of her fingers."
Explanation:
1. "The best" should be changed to "The best girl" to match the context in the later part of the sentence.
2. "girl at sport" should be changed to "girl at sports" to make it grammatically correct.
3. "bestfirend" should be changed to "best friend" as two separate words are used in English.
4. "it was" should be added to connect the sentence with the previous one.
5. "the bath" should be changed to "the town's public bath" to provide more context.
6. "and their parents" should be added after "lower school" to show that parents were also present.
7. "nearly deaf" should be changed to "nearly went deaf" as it better reflects the intended meaning.
8. "foe" should be changed to "for" to correct the preposition.
9. "by " should be added after "won the race" to specify her margin of victory.
10. "all the girls" should be changed to "All the girls" to follow capitalization rules.