Correct the following sentences for subject-verb agreement, tenses and fragments.

1. Q -My car it is very beautiful.
A -My car is very beautiful.
2. Q -When he thought he could afford
to pay his own school fees.
A -He thought he could afford to pay
his own school fees.
3. Q -This students keep making noise.
A -This student keep making noise. OR
-These students keep making noise.
4. Q -When I was young, I use to love
playing with dolls.
A -When I was young, I loved playing
with dolls. OR
-When I was young, I used to love
playing with dolls.
5. Q -I'm don't like horror movies.
A -I do not like horror movies!
6. Q -Going home now, how I wish I
could get there before it starts
to rain.
A -Going home now, I wish I could
get home before it starts to rain.
7. Q -Everyone have the right to live
happily ever after.
A -Everyone has the right to live
happily ever after.
8. Q -These are great news indeed, I
can't believe I made it!
A -This is great news indeed, I
can't believe I made it!
9. Q -In 1990, he lead his team to a
glorious victory.
A -In 1990, he led his team to a
glorious victory.
10. Q -I am writing my homework after
every class.
A -After every class, I write my
homework.

8A -This is great news indeed; I

can't believe I made it!

6A -I am going home now; I wish I could
get home before it starts to rain.

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1. Q -My car it is very beautiful.

A -My car is very beautiful.

Explanation: Remove the unnecessary repetition of the subject "car."

2. Q -When he thought he could afford to pay his own school fees.
A -He thought he could afford to pay his own school fees.

Explanation: The question is already correctly written. No correction is needed.

3. Q -This students keep making noise.
A -This student keeps making noise. OR
-These students keep making noise.

Explanation: The subject "this" requires the singular verb "keeps," while the plural subject "students" requires the plural verb "keep." Choose the correct option depending on whether you are referring to one student or multiple students.

4. Q -When I was young, I use to love playing with dolls.
A -When I was young, I loved playing with dolls. OR
-When I was young, I used to love playing with dolls.

Explanation: The correct past tense of "use" is "used." Choose between the simple past tense "loved" or the past habitual action "used to love" based on your intended meaning.

5. Q -I'm don't like horror movies.
A -I do not like horror movies!

Explanation: Remove the unnecessary contraction "I'm" and replace it with "I." The correct negative form is "do not" rather than "don't."

6. Q -Going home now, how I wish I could get there before it starts to rain.
A -Going home now, I wish I could get home before it starts to rain.

Explanation: Remove the unnecessary repetition of "how." The corrected sentence maintains the intended meaning.

7. Q -Everyone have the right to live happily ever after.
A -Everyone has the right to live happily ever after.

Explanation: Use the singular verb "has" instead of the plural verb "have" to agree with the singular subject "everyone."

8. Q -These are great news indeed, I can't believe I made it!
A -This is great news indeed, I can't believe I made it!

Explanation: Change "these" to "this" to match the singular noun "news." The corrected sentence maintains the intended meaning.

9. Q -In 1990, he lead his team to a glorious victory.
A -In 1990, he led his team to a glorious victory.

Explanation: Change "lead" to "led" to reflect the correct past tense form of the verb.

10. Q -I am writing my homework after every class.
A -After every class, I write my homework.

Explanation: The corrected sentence rearranges the word order to match the usual sequence of events.