Please help with this whole paragraph I rewrote it and thank you Ms Sue

Therefore, supporting the fact, that you can dress a diverse group of students with uniforms, they would not see and believe the things the same way, as other students with uniforms. If there were a standard in place, then it would maintain a certain order in the school. Very much like the United States, in general, a country filled with diverse individuals, but all following the same set of laws set forth by the government.

I can't critique this without knowing what came before it.