Could you help with the punctuation on this paragraph please! Therefore,supporting the fact that you can dress a diverse group of students one way, but they would not all believe or view things the same way. If there is a standard in place, then it would maintain a certain order in the school, very much like the United States in general, a country filled with diverse individuals, but all following the same set of laws set forth by the government.
The first "sentence" is such a garbled mess that it needs to be rewritten. Punctuation won't help.
". . . certain order in the school." << period
The last sentence needs to be rewritten.
Thank you Sue
Here it is again rewritten please help me. Therefore, supporting the fact, that you can dress a diverse group of students with uniforms, they would not see and believe the things the same way, as other students with uniforms. If there were a standard in place, then it would maintain a certain order in the school. Very much like the United States, in general, a country filled with diverse individuals, but all following the same set of laws set forth by the government.
Sure! Let's break down the paragraph and correct the punctuation errors:
"Therefore, supporting the fact that you can dress a diverse group of students one way, but they would not all believe or view things the same way. If there is a standard in place, then it would maintain a certain order in the school, very much like the United States in general, a country filled with diverse individuals, but all following the same set of laws set forth by the government."
1. "Therefore, supporting the fact that you can dress a diverse group of students one way, but they would not all believe or view things the same way."
The original sentence is missing a comma after "Therefore" to separate it from the rest of the sentence. It should be: "Therefore, supporting the fact that you can dress a diverse group of students one way, but they would not all believe or view things the same way."
2. "If there is a standard in place, then it would maintain a certain order in the school, very much like the United States in general, a country filled with diverse individuals, but all following the same set of laws set forth by the government."
In this sentence, there are a few punctuation errors:
- After "If there is a standard in place," there should be a comma before "then."
- After "order in the school," there should be a comma to separate it from the next part of the sentence.
- After "general," there should be a comma to separate it from the next part of the sentence.
- After "individuals," there should be a comma to separate it from the next part of the sentence.
The corrected sentence is: "If there is a standard in place, then it would maintain a certain order in the school, very much like the United States in general, a country filled with diverse individuals, but all following the same set of laws set forth by the government."
Here is the paragraph with the corrected punctuation:
"Therefore, supporting the fact that you can dress a diverse group of students one way, but they would not all believe or view things the same way. If there is a standard in place, then it would maintain a certain order in the school, very much like the United States in general, a country filled with diverse individuals, but all following the same set of laws set forth by the government."