Please do know how to rewrite this sentence
It is not reasonable and it is not all right that individuals need to live in panic
Also my introduction needs to be more argumentative
How many people would be affected if marriage was legalized? Yes! Of course, obsoletely no one would be affected if marriage was legalized
I need a stronger thesis
Please help me
It it unreasonable for individuals to live in a state of panic.
Thesis? I am wondering if you have written your essay..thesis statement is what your essay developed points to prove.
Well all you need to do is just rewrite your passage or read over top professional person who does 100 and creative writing so my buddy asked me all the questions you want I got 200 out of 200 marks.
To rewrite the sentence, you can say: "The requirement for individuals to live in constant fear is both unreasonable and unjust."
To make your introduction more argumentative, you can add additional information or context to support your stance. For example: "The legalization of marriage has been a contentious issue, with many questioning the potential impact it might have on society. However, upon closer examination, it becomes evident that the number of people affected by the legalization of marriage is, in fact, negligible."
To develop a stronger thesis, you can emphasize the significance of your argument or make a clear statement about your position. For instance: "The legalization of marriage has no substantial negative consequences on society, thus making the denial of this fundamental right to same-sex couples both unjust and irrational."
Remember, the final structure of your introduction and thesis will depend on the specific argument and direction you wish to take in your essay.