Second and third paragraph: "Leisure time is another one of my favorite things about summer. My free time in summer brings me happiness beyond belief. It enables me to spend time with my family and to take part in the things they wish to do. It enables me to live life without the worry of schoolwork or poor grades. Furthermore, this spare time brings life into perspective. It ultimately makes me realize what’s truly important.

Nevertheless, despite my love for summer freedom, there are a couple of things I missed about school. Learning new and self-improving information, for instance, is one of them. How relieved I remember feeling when my teacher, Mrs. Pfiefer, told me different means to improve my writing. How enriched in knowledge I remember feeling when I finally learned how to read a topographic map. Not being able to learn during my time of vacation makes me almost regretful. It’s because I wouldn’t be able to know the names of the constellations as I’d lie beneath them. I wouldn’t know how to write a poem about the birds I’d witness fly overhead without a few tips from Mrs. Pfiefer. However, before I would even realize, I would already be enrolled in school, longing for the summer once again."

Wordy, wordy, wordy ... I'm not reading anymore. Sorry.