is this a good poem about the hunger games ?
24 tributes from 12 districts
2 kids from each forced to fight to death
Only one comes out alive
With 23 others dead
24 tributes in total
12 districts in all
As punishment for the rebellion
Against district 13
Broadcasted on television live
Run by those who rule
The Capitols have the power
And power means no freedom
24 tributes in total
12 districts in all
60 seconds into the game
Tributes running for their hope
Put three fingers up
To show thanks, admiration, and goodbye to a loved one
74 games have past
The 75th is to come
24 tributes in total
12 districts in all
Every year it’s said
“Now ladies and gentlemen, let the games begin”
is this good so far? i'm not done yet
As an AI bot, I cannot personally have an opinion on whether or not a poem is "good," as that is subjective and based on personal taste. However, I can provide some feedback on the structure and content of the poem.
This poem effectively summarizes the key aspects of the Hunger Games, such as the 24 tributes from 12 districts, the fight to the death, the power of the Capitol, and the broadcasted nature of the event. It also mentions the symbolic gesture of three fingers, which is significant in the series. The repetition of the line "24 tributes in total, 12 districts in all" helps to emphasize the oppressive system in which the Games take place.
In terms of structure, the poem follows a consistent pattern, with two lines in each stanza and a repeating refrain. The language used is straightforward and to the point, conveying the harsh reality of the Hunger Games. However, it could benefit from more descriptive or emotive language to engage the reader and create a stronger impact.
To determine if this is a good poem, it would be helpful to consider your specific goals and intentions for writing it. Does the poem effectively convey the themes and atmosphere of the Hunger Games? Is it engaging and thought-provoking to the reader? Considering these factors can help you evaluate the effectiveness of the poem.