Biographical Essay Evaluation (Writeacher)

Write a 3-paragraph Biographicl Essay. Discuss your experiences with summer: the things you enjoyed and the things you missed about school.

What I have written: "A strong sense of freedom is one of my favorite things about summer. Setting in only once the school year has come to an end, this feeling rids me of the stress and worry of assigned and incompleted schoolwork, of poor grades and disappointing my teacher. Along with my stress and worry also leaves the reason why I am often deprived of sleep during the seemingly endless school year: an early morning religious class known as Seminary. Thus, is is almost a joy to experience such freedom, to wander aimlessly with very few cares in the world, if only for a short period of time.

The temperate weather is another enjoyable aspect of summer. It is often warm enough to swim in the cool waters of a pool or a small pond or even a lake--all of which I have done during my many summer vacations. Furthermore, the mild climate makes the experience of hiking, one of my favorite seasonal activities, all the more enjoyable. For instance, while hiking trails in the winter may be beautiful with littered snow, hiking trails in the summer are the ones that exhibit nature's life at its fullest.

Nevertheless, despite my love for freedom during the summer, there are some things that I missed about school. The first would be my teacher and interacting with my school's staff. They are all so friendly; it's almost difficult to think that they might not return to work for my school once the summer ends. It is also difficult to imagine being a student of a different teacher besides the one I am of now, for I have never learned more--another reasoning of my missing school--than from my High School teacher, Mrs. Pfiefer."

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