I was wondering if I could please get some help. I am having trouble with this Essay. thank you very much for your help in advance
Ok this is the scenario..
Your favorite cusin has moved to your area and is looking for a job. Since she had previously worked only as a cashier at a department store, she plans to apply at simiar stores. But you know she has many talents. In fact, you think sheis a perfect candidate for a job opening where you work. Your boss is looking for a reliable assistant. You think she'd get along with the boss and you'e sure she'd be good at the job.
Your goal is to presuade you cousin to apply for the job. You decide to e-mail her a paragraph with the specifics of the job and the reasons she should apply
Note use informal tone, but take care to use correct business writing to show you take your recommendation seriously.
Now here is the trouble ..
I don't know how to start the paragraph like an e-mail I have a few ideas but I just can't seem to get it right this is what I have so far
There has been several events in my cousins life that she has shared with me such has helping out at our local hospital at the information desk. I went to high school with her and I can remember she always helped the school nurse in any way she could. The school nurse even had mentioned to her that she should consider a job in the medical field. My cousin's parents wanted her to become something else, so they din't encourge her, in this field. She didn't have much confidence in herself because of her parent's lack of confidence in her.
please let me kmow if you have any ideas thanks
First, you're supposed to email your cousin. Your paragraph talks ABOUT her, but doesn't address her.
You might consider starting something like this:
Hi Cuz,
Have I got a job for you! My boss needs an assistant, and you'd be perfect for this position.
Please complete this email -- and we'll be glad to comment on it.
what is the question
Hello all...
I am in a bit of a pickle at the moment.
I have my English (4U) ISP due on Tuesday - a 1000 word comparative essay on the novels "Angela's Ashes" and "The Woman Who Walked Into Doors" ....and I'm a little lost.
What to compare? The authors style? The main themes? Different teachers want different things, right?
Does comparing involve only the things that link them, or should I be adding also the things that make them different?
I know it seems silly that I've never done a comparative essay before - and yes I have checked various sites with my queries, but I definetley need some real-live help.
I'm also worried about making it too cut-and-dry - I'm sure my teacher will have no place in her heart for another boring essay to be made to read.
So... pretty much ANY help would be good help at the moment, having read the books or not.
Site links, tips, example essays.... anything.
Thanks a bundle you guys!!
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Subject: Exciting Job Opportunity You Won't Want to Miss!
Hi [Cousin's Name],
I hope this email finds you well! I've got some exciting news to share with you. Remember how we've always talked about finding a job that truly showcases your talents and brings out the best in you? Well, I think I may have found the perfect opportunity for you.
You know how you have always been a fantastic multitasker and a natural when it comes to helping others? I believe these skills would be an excellent fit for the job opening we have at my workplace. Our boss is seeking a reliable assistant, and I couldn't think of anyone more suited for the role than you.
I remember all the times you lent a helping hand, whether it was volunteering at our local hospital's information desk or assisting the school nurse back when we were in high school. Your dedication and willingness to go above and beyond, even without any prior experience, left a lasting impression on me. It's clear to me that you have a knack for providing exceptional support and making people feel at ease.
Moreover, I know you've always had an interest in the medical field. Do you remember that conversation you had with the school nurse? She saw your potential and encouraged you to consider pursuing a career in a similar field. I believe this opportunity could be a stepping stone toward fulfilling your passion while showcasing your abilities in a professional environment.
Working alongside our boss would be an excellent fit for you. He/she values reliability, teamwork, and a positive attitude - qualities I know you possess in abundance. I have no doubt that you would create a harmonious and productive atmosphere in the workplace, and your exceptional work ethic would be greatly appreciated.
Don't let past doubts or lack of confidence deter you from seizing this exciting chance. I have every confidence that you would excel in this role. Applying for this job could be the first step toward an amazing career path that truly reflects your talents and passions.
Take a leap of faith, [Cousin's Name]. I strongly urge you to consider applying for the position. If you need any more information or support during the application process, I'm here to help you every step of the way.
Wishing you all the best,
[Your Name]