Title:The dawn it comes
There once was a boy named John
whose never saw the dawn.
When the sun went down
and went to the pond.
And saw what was dim.
Is this a good poem?
This is a limerick, lines 1,2,and 5 must rhyme.Lines 3 and 4 must rhyme. Please help if can.
Your rhymes don't rhyme.
It's hard to rhyme John. How about making your first line --
Here's a boy named Johnny
Who never had much money.
can i start the third line like this?:
When he got poor
fourth line:
and went for a call.
line 5:
And the sun turned sunny.
Your third and fourth lines don't rhyme, but your fifth line looks good.
then can the fourth one be:
and became boor
The fourth line doesn't make much sense.
Here are some words that rhyme with poor:
doer, fewer, newer, sewer, tour,
so can the fourth line be:
and went for the sewer
Yes.
Thanks
You're welcome.
Yes, this is a limerick poem. However, to ensure that it follows the traditional limerick structure, we need to make a few changes.
A limerick typically consists of five lines with a rhyme scheme of AABBA. Lines 1, 2, and 5 should have a similar rhyme, while lines 3 and 4 have their own rhyme.
Here's an example of how you can modify the poem to fit the limerick structure:
There once was a boy named John (A)
Whose view of dawn had been gone (A)
When the sun went away (B)
He would sit by the bay (B)
And lament the light he'd not drawn (A)
In this modified version, lines 1 and 2 rhyme (John/gone), lines 3 and 4 also rhyme (away/bay), and all three ending lines (5,7,8) rhyme (John/drawn). The poem now follows the limerick structure accurately.