How should I revise my answer?
These questions regard the poem "Jabberwocky."
1. One critic said that "Jabberwocky," despite its odd language, tells a story like many legends of knights and dragons. Do you agree? Why or why not?
A: I agree with this critic’s opinion because, like in every tale of a knight facing whatever vile creature people fear, “Jabberwocky,” despite its odd language, is about facing your demons.
I see no change after my comments here: http://www.jiskha.com/display.cgi?id=1393784330
...answer repeats too much of the question and then you don't explain what you mean by "facing your own demons."
To revise your answer, you can take the following steps:
1. Begin by restating the question as part of your response. This helps to provide clear context.
2. Include a more detailed explanation of why you agree or disagree with the critic's opinion. Provide specific examples from the poem to support your stance.
3. Consider expanding on the theme of facing one's fears or demons in "Jabberwocky" to strengthen your argument.
4. Optionally, you can also explore any counterarguments or alternative interpretations that exist, providing a well-rounded analysis.
Here is a revised version of your answer:
"In response to the question of whether I agree with the critic's assertion that "Jabberwocky" resembles the legends of knights and dragons, I concur with this perspective. Although the poem's language may appear nonsensical, it retains essential elements found in tales of knights and dragons. "Jabberwocky" can be seen as a metaphorical representation of confronting and triumphing over one's inner demons.
The poem embodies the archetype of a knight embarking on a perilous quest to slay a fearsome creature. Just as knights face daunting challenges and risks in legends, the protagonist in "Jabberwocky" bravely engages in battle against the monstrous Jabberwock to protect the realm. By doing so, the poem conveys a universal theme of bravery, conquering fears, and achieving personal growth.
For example, the line 'Beware the Jubjub bird, and shun / The frumious Bandersnatch' illustrates the cautionary nature often seen in legends, warning the protagonist of the dangers that lie ahead. The poem's use of vivid language and imaginative descriptions further enhance its storytelling qualities, contributing to its resemblance to traditional legends.
While it is imperative to acknowledge alternative interpretations, such as the argument that "Jabberwocky" serves solely as an exercise in wordplay and nonsense, the presence of a hero's journey and themes of overcoming adversity strengthen the case for comparing it to knight and dragon legends.
In conclusion, I agree with the critic's analysis that "Jabberwocky" shares similarities with legends involving knights and dragons. The poem's underlying theme of facing one's fears and the presence of a heroic protagonist embarking on a perilous quest align with the storytelling found in these traditional tales."