french- please help

ugh please help me, im having such a huge stress over this!

Le premier arrondissement de Paris est le plus petit et assez historique. Il a été créé le 24 mars 1852. Le population du premier arrondissement était approximativement de quatre-vingt dix mille habitants il y a cent quarante ans. Maintenant, elle est approximativement de dix-sept mille habitants. Il y a beaucoup d'endroits à voir et beaucoup de choses à faire. Par exemple, Le Musée du Louvre et le Jardin des Tuileries sont les endroits très populaire pour les touristes et les Parisiens. Pour le divertissement, beaucoup de gens vont à la Comédie-Française pour regarder une pièce ou aux Halles pour faire du shopping.

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  1. Au centre du premier arrondissement, Le Musée du Louvre est le plus grand musée de Paris. Pendant le douzième siècle, le roi Philippe Auguste a construit Le Louvre, mais il ne l'a fini qu’au dix-huitième siècle. Le Louvre était la maison du roi Louis XIII et Louis XVI, mais quand Louis XVI fut mis en état d’arrestation, Le Louvre est devenu un musée.

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  2. Originairement, Le Musée du Louvre a contenu seulment des oeuvres d'art français. Aujourd’hui, Le Musée du Louvre contient plus de trois cent quatre-vingt mille objets d’art et il est organisé en huit départements. Une nouvelle addition au Musée du Louvre est la pyramide et elle est localisée au dehors du Louvre. La Pyramide du Louvre a été conçue par L. M. Pei qui est chinois. Quand La Pyramide du Louvre a fut finie, le public ne l’a pas aimée parce qu’elle était trop moderne. La plupart des gens croyaient que la pyramide se ne fondait pas dans le cadre historique. Aujourd’hui La Gioconda par Leonardo Da Vinci accroche dans La Pyramide du Louvre. La Pyramid du Louvre est aussi l’entrée au musée.

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  3. Thank you for using the Jiskha Homework Help Forum. I need larger print, so I'm printing this in a larger font, skipping lines. I'll be back after I get to read it.

    Mme

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  4. Just why were you stressed? You did a fine job and there are just a few things.

    Paragraph 1, sentence 3 = La population

    sentence 4 = l'île? there is a typo

    sentence 5 = populaires (plural adjective).....les parisiens (lower-case)

    Paragraph 2, sentence 3 = instead of the passé simple, which is in encyclopedias, literature, etc., the passé composé, fut = a été OR était

    Paragraph 3, sentence 5, a fut = a été OR était

    sentence 6, "se ne fondait pas" = since you provide no English I'm not sure what you are trying to say; if you wish to say "to fit in with ..." = ne tient pas dans

    Everything else looks fine!

    Mme

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  5. ty so much ><

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