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Thesis: My favorite thing to do is listen to music.

Transition--

Cool Closing Sentence: "Sing like no one is listening, dance like no one is watching, love like you'll never get hurt and live like it's heaven on Earth"

I need help on my transition sentence. Should it be; I love music ?

It could be.

It's impossible to judge without seeing the entire essay.

When writing an essay make sure that you do not use the word I a lot so that your paper keeps the attention of your audience.

"Sing like no one is listening, dance like no one is watching..."

Isn't that a quotation from someone? Mark Twain maybe?

DO NOT PLAGIARIZE!

I looked for the author and only found "anonymous."

Your transition sentence could be improved to create a smoother flow in your thesis statement. Instead of simply stating "I love music," you can make it more engaging and connect with your audience. Here's a suggestion for a transition sentence: "As the great philosopher Friedrich Nietzsche once said, 'Without music, life would be a mistake,' and this sentiment resonates deeply with my favorite thing to do: listening to music." This way, you connect your thesis statement to a well-known quote, making it more relatable and captivating.