German. Please help :)

Could you proof read this?

Kannst du deine tägliche Routine beschriben?
Um sieben Uhr stehe ich auf und dann wasche ich mich und bürste mir die hare. Ich frühstücke und dannach fahre ich zur schule um viertel vor acht mit dem Bus.
Ich komme um viertel vor vier nach Hause. Ich gehe um elf ins Bett.

Wie komme du zur Schule und warum?
Ich fahre mit dem bus, weil ich mit meinen Freunded fahren kann aber ich finde das unbequem. Es dauert ungefähr zwanzig minuten. In der vergangenheit bin ich mit Auto gefahren aber meine mutter war sie langsam.

Wo Wohnst du? Kannst du… beschreiben?
Ich wohne in Hattersley, das ist in England. Hattersley ist ein kleines dorf. In Hattersley gibt es kein kino, aber wir haben zwei Kirchen. Ich mag das nitch, weil es langweilig ist. In der Vergangenheit, gab es keine Kirche. In der Zunkunft werden wir ein schwimmbad haben. Es wird sehr gut sein.

Was Kann man in… machen?
In Hattersley mann kann mit Freunde ausgehen und das ist es! Es ist langweilig. Auch ich gehe zur Manchester, das ist einen groβstatd auch es gibt viel los. Mann kann ins Konzert gehen, es ist fantastisch. Ich finde Hattersley unheimlich schrecklich aber Manchester ist super!









jw. is german easier than spanish?

I don't do spanish so I don't know. I think german is pretty easy cos it's so similar to english, but that's from my point of view.

thanks for the tip, i am having trouble deciding which is easier and more fun!?!

Do you can described your daily routine? At seven o'clock I rise and then I wash myself and brush myself the hare. I eat breakfast and go would educate dannach I to that around quarter before eight with the bus. I come around quarter before four home. I concern eleven into the bed.

How do you come to the school and why? I go go can find with the bus, because I with my Freunded however I that uncomfortably. It lasts approximately twenty minutes. In the past, I went was with car however my mother it slow.

Where do you live? Can you describe…? I live in Hattersley, that is in England. Hattersley is a small village. In Hattersley, there is no movie theater, but we have two churches. I like the nitch because it is boring. In the past, there was no church. In the Zunkunft, we will have a schwimmbad. It will be very good.

What can one make in…? In Hattersley man can go out with friends and is that it! It is boring. Also I go off is is to the Manchester, that one also there much. Man can go into the concert, it is fantastic. I find is Hattersley uncannily terribly however Manchester super!


This is what I got, I don't know what you want me to say though. But here, take it.

German is fun cos it sounds so funny but the tenses are really hard to learn. I've always wanted to learn spanish but have never had the chance... I don't think I'd be good at it though; I can't roll my r's :(


Oh that sucks. I know little german and more spanish. and of course english. My mother is german but she is low german so i don't understand some of the high german which people speak now adays. most of it is the same but some words i don't understand.
Spanish is fun expecially talking to others who know spanish. I am getting better at it.

I think spanish would be more useful too, since most popular holiday destinations tend to speak spanish. Your mom is german? :) My dad is irish and he has a daft accent which I like to take the mick out of.

haha that is cool! is he light toned skin? i have a friend who has an irish background, she's pale white.

Yup, pale white, which I inherited... yeah, thanks alot dad!

hehe. that's not all bad though. hey do you have email, then we don't fill up pages on here.

WooooooooooooooW!!!!!!!!!! :') YOU GUYS FILLED UP THE WHOLE PADGE! :) Hey SHAY! YOUR FUNNY!: ' ) WHISH YOU GUYS LUCK ON YOUR NEW FRIENDSHIP!

haha thanks i'm the funny one now. no i just think that filling up the page is causeing me and others to loose track of homework on here. and if you would quit shouting and ranting about how we did that you would do your own work.

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