I have already submitted a composition for proofreading but no one has responded. So I'll repost it just in case it wasn't flagged.
Me gusta pasar al tiempo con mis amigos porque son muy interesantes. Sus nombres son Clarissa, Caitlin, Jennifer, Victoria y son todos de Nueva York. Clarissa es de Sao Pauolo en Brasil, una ciudad grande. Su tierra natal es en Brasil pero disfruta la calidad de vida en Los Estados Unidos. Los padres de Jennifer y Caitlin inmigraron a Los Estados Unidos de Ireland y los padres de Victoria fueron immigrantes de Ghana y mis padres fueron de Nigeria. Tenemos personalidades diferentes y muy interesantes.
Clarissa baila salsa y nos enseña la danza en la discoteca. Ella es muy saliente pero somos tímida. Jennifer, Caitlin, Victoria y yo nos gustamos estudiar en la biblioteca porque somos inteligente. También disfruto ir al restaurante para beber café y discutir el chisme con mis amigas. Descubrí que Jennifer está enojado con su novio porque él pasa mucho tiempo con una otra chica y ella es fea. Ella piensa que se romperá porque ella se mudará a Georgia. Queremos ayudarle pero estamos soltera y decidimos discutir su problema en el futuro. Después, volvemos a la universidad y miramos la televisión. Pienso que Jennifer necesita escoger un alma gemela en la discoteca este fin de semana. Ella está de acuerdo conmigo y dice que soy muy agradable. Clarrisa, Caitlin y Zanada escuchan música y comienzan a bailar.
Estoy muy contenta que conocí estas chicas en la universidad porque mi vida es muy interesante ahora. Aunque somos muy diferentes, siempre nos gustamos tener divertida. Finalmente, continuarámos nuestra amistad después nuestra graduación. Tengo un red de apoyo ahora. Para la vacación en la primavera, viajaré muchos países con ellas. Estoy muy emocionado de ver lo que el futuro va a ser.
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I'll send the link to your post to our Spanish expert, SraJMcGin. Be patient, please.
Since I don't come to the Homework Board any longer, I depend on anything's being sent to me. Just received this.
2nd lie, I believe you are mentioning all girls. Remember that all adjectives have the same number (singular/plural) and gender (masculine/feminine) as the noun(s) modified. "todas" referring to all the girls.
Some grammarians prefer "el Brasil" but that might depend on your textbook/teacher. "disfrutar" takes a "de" when you mention "(of what you enjoy)
Ireland = Irlandia ADj ective after "somos" which is plural = inteligentes. "Disfruto de ir" Odd to say "el chisme" as is there only ONE? Perhaps "unos chismes"
Another ajdective...Jennifer está "enojada" The word "otro/otra" means "ANother so drop the un/una = tiempo con otra chica
"se romperá" = she will get broken???
Difference between "ser" and "estar" is that "estamos solteraS" = we SEEM single (but aren't really) vs "somos solteraS" = we ARE single
Después = do you want to say we ARE returning to the university OR we DID return? = volvimos
un alma gemela = this is understandable, although perhaps not the best expressio
The verb "gustar" means "to be pleasing to..." It does NOT mean "to like~!" "Nos gustamos" = we please each other or we like each other BUT I believe you want to say "we like to have fun" which is actually "to have fun (it) is pleasing to us" = Nos gusta tener diversión (fun as the noun, not the adjective)
Careful with the future = continuarEmos....después de nuestra graduación (después is an adverb, whioe después de is a preposition.)
"la vacación" is ALWAYS plural = Para las vacaciones...viajare A muchos países
You too are female, correct? "Estoy muy emocionada"
I'll flag this, in case y ou have any questions. IF you have tie, post what you now believe to be totally correct for a final proofreading.
Sra
So to say she enjoys the quality of life of America is supposed to be disfruta de la calida...?
YES. DISFRUTAR DE = means to enjoy something and when you say what it is, the "de" is required
I still don't know what you intended to say with "se romperá."
Sra
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