Posts by efi
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can u give me guidelines to solve this exercise or tell me if they are right please? Avoid discriminatory language: change these sentences to avoid discriminatory language. 1. any worker who ignores this rule will have his salary reduced. my answer: The employee who ignores ...
sorry for the above comment, i'm really in a hurry. i read my book and solve this exercise which is the easier from all the other
i don't see any help at all. can you please solve the first just as an example? thanks anyway
Avoid camouflaged words 1. it was my duty to make a determination of any damages. 2. Harold made a recommendation that we fire Mr. Schultz. 3. we will ask him to bring about a change in his work routine. 4. this new equipment will result in a savings in maintenance. 5. will ...
i managed to solved two, can u see if they are right? 4. the writer believes that this company policy is wrong. 3. your superior directed you to complete this assignment by noon. ok lets try the number 2. 2. the typical union member believes thathis or her welfare is not ...
Limiting use of Passive voice. 1. Our action is based on the assumption that the competition will be taken by surprise. 2. It is believed by the typical union member that his or her welfare is not considered to be important by management. 3. You were directed by your ...
24 john lost a lot of money in L V. i also did 25 & 26
Selecting concrete words 22. we have found that young men are best for this work. 23. She makes good grades 24. John lost a fortune in Las Vegas. 25. if we don't receive the goods soon we will cancel. 26.some years ago she made good money 27. His grades on the aptitude ...
an hour ago i returned from college. i know we have to make our exercises. but i forgot and i have to delivered them tomorrow all. i already solve that exercises.
Exercise Guideline:Assume that your readers are at about the 10th grade level in education. Revise these sentences for easy communication to this audience. 1. we must terminate all deficit financing. 2.we must endeavor to correct this problem by expediting delivery. 3. A ...
The proceeds of a $7,500.00, 10% simple discounted note for 85 days is: