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thanks very much ms. sue i like that one :D

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ms. sue you watch movie a beautiful mind? i tell you yesterday that i be writing a compare contrast essay of this movie with the yellow wallpaper story. i not know what to title this? i want to be cool, one person name their unbalanced. you have suggest what i name mine?

Art - Evaluation
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thank you ms. sue what else i say about underwater life?

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for Art i draw a fish, and i have to say what it mean. i write that i try to send out message to protect sea life, but i not know why? it be too hard to describe, i just say that these sea creatures be just like us, wanting hygiene, hving good habitat, being healthy. i not ...

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thanks ms. sue i hve word delusions in my essay a lot there be other words for delusions?

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thanks ms. sue :) the original sentence which be part of my thesis be.. .. it's a ride to a new world through their thoughts, feelings, and opinions. ^ that make sense? i telling about characters that have mental illnesses which be character from movie a beautiful mind and...

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what be better word for (and how they see things) any stronger word i use to replace this?

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thanks ms. sue :)

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thank you very much ms. sue :) i comparing this with beautiful mind movie. and i write this sentence but it not make sense teacher say. ...both slowly got worse, and were in a conflict with their minds.

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i doing compare contrast essay and for the short story The yellow wallpaper it be that her condition get worse as her interest in wallpaper deepens. it not get better right?

ms. sue
thank you very much ms. sue for helping me :)

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it ask What be total effect of images in paragraph 4? for this it be that it give picture of winter in prairies. also these be the other characteristics of her hometown and nation that they not be cruel it have Beautiful nature, oddities of place be endless?

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thank you very much ms. sue :) it ask what important role do paragraphs 12-14 play in classifying the argument? It tell to respect your land and not call it dull?

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thank you ms. sue :) ms. sue yesterday you say that author compare her town to nation as whole, that be because she tell about oddities?

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other characteristics be of her hometown and nation that they not be cruel it have Beautiful nature, oddities of place be endless. paragraph 4 be personification when it personify the moccasins. there be any similes? alliterations? i have my other questions above

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What be total effect of images in paragraph 4? I not get what this means, it just tell about surroundings. There is figure of speech in paragraph 3 “sea of land” and in paragraph 4 the prairie becomes “white dazzling deserts” what be five other figures of ...

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what important role do paragraphs 12-14 play in classifying the argument? It tell to respect your land and not call it dull?

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ms. sue yesterday you say that author compare her town to nation as whole, that be because she tell about oddities? What be three characterisitics of her home town that she see later in her nation? Or even in world as whole? Refer to a passage to show each comparison. I not ...

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thanks very much ms. sue :) in paragraph 4 she tell about excitement she have riding horses. she tell about mocassins squeaking and slithering on the hard rutted snow of the roads.. she tell about adventure she have.

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ms. sue for story yesterday i hve these other questions why does author end with "eyes" because she experience everything with them? why does author begin with pair of opposites in paragraph 1? i not get this one what do the words "wodges, clonk, cannon forth ...

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thanks ms. sue these be only other questions left why does author end with "eyes" because she experience everything with them? why does author begin with pair of opposites in paragraph 1? what do the words "wodges, clonk, cannon forth hve effect? they just be ...

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i not really understand this story, she use really strong words. it also ask that she put her main point into thesis state, identify it. that be her life? it say do she mostly compare or contrast her prarie town to nation as whole?

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what organizational goals do main character achieve by repeating her titlle phrase in both opening and closing?

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okay this be the story Margaret Laurence - Where the world began A strange place it was, that place where the world began. A place of incredible happenings, splendours and revelations, despairs like multitudinous pits of isolated hells. A place of shadow-spookiness, inhabited ...

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ms. sue i read story you please help me with questions?

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oh thank you ms. sue :)

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what it mean when it say: i was reefing through a post

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thanks ms. sue :)

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ms. sue you know the story i write yesterday i not know what to name it, you know any cool names i give it?

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thanks very much ms. sue for helping :) you please able to delete that story post i not want any plagiarsing issue.

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ms. sue i reply to my english post sorry it almost on other page so i post this.

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thanks ms. sue i glad u like it but i not know what to put as solution to story, how to prove that it just be his imagination.

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Okay thank you very much ms sue :)

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i also want to make it 400 words, but i not know how i get to main point of story in just 400 words.

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^thank you :) Ms. sue here it be. Teacher says there have to be three switches of the illness going from better to worse or vice-versa. It has to be descriptive, in the present, compelling character, good use of vocab, powerful, monolouge/hook/dialouge, and creativity and ...

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Okay I post it on here in a few minutes.

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thanks very much ms. sue :)

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this be last question What figure of speech portrays the wharf’s ‘crooked legs stockinged in barncales”? where else do it occur? How do it further the description? I not get this one I think the figure of speech be personification but I not get where else it ...

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Emily plays with words she write slugs ‘slimed’ walk instead of just describe walk as ‘slimy’ find other words she use in fresh ways. I only find this one - - stinging nettles. I not get what other ones there be?

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thanks very much ms. sue:) they be onomatophoiea words?

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What do Emily gain by using words such as “grated” ,“slithered” , “ooze”? She gain sound effects? Feelings?

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ms. sue i have little more questions on story i be posting one by one. Even though this author Emily be admired as writer, she be better well-known as painter. What aspects of her style remind u of the visual arts? Write down passages that illustrate ur answers. I get the ...

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thanks very much ms. sue sorry ms. sue next time i ask you questions straightaway.

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yes the teacher say when she done reading it she be giving us assignment. but i not really get it so far her parents be really wierd, teacher be at part where it be jeanette's birthday and she ask her dad to quit drinking. also i not get the part where dad had made plan to...

ms. sue
thanks very much ms. sue :)

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ms. sue only one story be due today and i do questions myself for that one but this one i need help you please help me? this be emily carr story d'sonoqua D’Sonoqua I was sketching in a remote Indian village when I first saw her. The village was one of those that the ...

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you please delete my english posts from here.

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they be due tomorrow but that alright i try finish them on my own. have a good night!

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ms. sue u be able help me with my english questions?

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i please need help with my work

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this be emily carr story d'sonoqua D’Sonoqua I was sketching in a remote Indian village when I first saw her. The village was one of those that the Indians use only for a few months in each year; the rest of the time it stands empty and desolate. I went there in one ...

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i guess on these ones because i not understand them How selectively do author select details frm her year in Africa? It say that in first paragraph for instance do she mention anything at all that be not important to her theme? I not get this one either. It not give any ...

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thanks writeacher i just need help with above questions

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i not get these ones either: How selectively do author select details frm her year in Africa? It say that in first paragraph for instance do she mention anything at all that be not important to her theme? I not get this one either. It not give any details in Africa in this ...

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thank you very much Writeacher i think author establish her contrast by halves. because in starting she talk about what gambian people do and in last part she mention about europe atmosphere.

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How selectively do author select details frm her year in Africa? It say that in first paragraph for instance do she mention anything at all that be not important to her theme? I not get this one either. It not give any details in Africa in this paragraph. It tell about food, ...

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i please need help with two short stories today. i write the first one here it be called Chicken-Hips. The women of the household clucked disapprovingly when they saw me. It was the first time I had worn African clothes since my arrival in tiny, dusty Gambia, and evidently ...

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alright thanks ms. sue :)

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i think you are right ms. sue i write on concept you tell me to, it make much more sense and be easier to follow. what this mental illness be called?

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yes ms. sue i mean the other person thinks he/she is the other person. and that person is close friend of this person.

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ms. sue i think of idea for mental illness story down below u please see if it make sense?

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I also show my cousin this but she say it not really make sense to her when main character step into third person shoes. how i make it more making sense?

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i think of doing mental illness story on stress. i think of doing this in third-person. my friend sort of add and give me more ideas for this story i be doing. please tell me if it be good and give any other ideas. and this third-person be close person to main character. ...

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ms. sue for my mental illness story i be writing, what narration I use? teacher say i can use same one in yellow wallpaper or come up with own unique style. I not know what be better than first-person narration? I think of third person narration but i not know if i be able to ...

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thanks very much ms. sue i hope to get writing on this by tomorrow:) hve a good night!

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ms. sue is adjustment disorder mental problem too? i look up some mental problems and this one be under less common mental disorders. i think most my family members relate with this disorder cause some their life event bring stress to them, it last for short though i think.

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thanks ms. sue :) do eating disorder be mental problem?

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hmm that be something interesting to write about but that be same as rock hudson story when he have hallucinations? do each mental problem have hallucinations?

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i have to make creative story abt me having mental illness. i really having trouble with this. i not know what mental problem to write about and how write it. i please really need help. in class we also watch movie A Beautiful Mind and this guy see delusions and have ...

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hve a good night ms. sue and thanks for helping with questions :)

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thank you:) ms. sue in my very first question i get the forshadowing quote right? i guess on that one.

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thanks very much ms. sue i right where i say when paranoia begin? it be when her husband not listen to her?

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that last 2 questions. how does author of story talk about wallpaper? what symbolism it obtain? She discuss wallpaper by showing herself being trapped and isolated in room where no one understand her. She be describing her own life. I not get the symbolism part. Where does ...

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thank you ms. sue :)

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thank you, so she still be living in same situation but with people she just be acting less crazy but she not be normal because of effect on brain.

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wud narrator be in same situation living in the present? What options she have? What treatment be offered to her? I think so because it have big effect on her brain already. It be too late for her i think. Options she have to be getting freedom be to do what she want. ...

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i also not get this one which be talk about 'madness' as social experience (phenonmenan) compare experience of madness with other kinds eg. social dev iates.

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thank you :) i not think there be any other interesting way to describe her feelings, that be the second part which i not get.

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story be more powerful in this first person narration? i write yes because we know what she feel and think. i not get second part to this which be there be other ways of describing what narrator think possible and/or more interesting? in anyways?

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thanks very much ms. sue :)

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One observer say of narrator, that ‘madness be her only freedom’ u agree with this? What other options she have? I not agree with this because narrator know what she want, but her husband not let her desire be fulfilled. Narrator wanted to write, and express herself ...

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thank you very much ms. sue :)

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in what way the madness in this story be a kind of trip, an inner trip instead of trad itional voyage? i not get this one.

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thank you :)

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tell the images that come into sight in story. eg pg. 11 a place "with hedges and walls and gates that lock, and lots of separate little houses for gardeners and people." that be dark images?

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3. How do writer create loneliness of narrator? Is the sensation of being alone, being solitary, part of the notio n of “madness”? i not sure if some of my answer be right. The author create lonliness of narrator through journal. There be no one that understand her, ...

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oops ms. sue i clicked this one too fast my number 4 answer be in above post.

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3. How do writer create loneliness of narrator? Is the sensation of being alone, being solitary, part of the notio n of “madness”? i not sure if some of my answer be right. The author create lonliness of narrator through journal. There be no one that understand her, ...

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thanks very much ms. sue there be any other literary devices I miss?

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1. it ask to give example of personifcation and forshadowing starting on pg. 11. Page 11 start from sentence - "It is stripped off - the paper - in great patches all around the head of my bed. Pg. 11 end with sentence. "at first he meant to repaper the room . . . ...

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ms. sue if u still not get this way i did it, then i be posting them here. i.imm.io/iQfF(DOT)jpeg

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i.imm.io/iQcf(DOT)jpeg i try this way, this what this other person do on jiskha.

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then i post them on here but ms. sue i try and paste site in adress bar without spaces and it be working for me. but if u not get it then i post on here.

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ms. sue most questions be hard for me, all of them be tricky so you please check if i do it write a few questions i just not get but i give try to most. here my answers. i not know if i get first few questions right where it say what be forshadowing i also not know if there be...

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