'Property law is an area of law that enforces rights of ownership, possession and transferability, over things , may it be, public property (government owned), private property such as homes or business and it can be tangible or intangabile.'
my first language isnt english, so my writing skills is poor , so i would apprecaite some help on fixing that.
thanks
What you have written is clear, so, mostly well done. You speak of homes and businessES. Both should be plural, more than one, since you speak of homes. You could also say A home or A business and it would mean the same. You also need a comma after "businesses". It's a compound sentence, with the connecting "and", so a comma is required, "businesses, and...". You could also make it two sentences: "....homes or businesses. It can be tangible or intangible."
I also advise a comma in the series "...ownership, possession, and transferability of things..." (no comma after "transferability". And, note, I wrote "OF things", not "OVER things".
My advice is to keep sentences short. They are much more to the point, and readable. They engage the readers thinking.
When you write complex and long sentences, with commas, and such, it takes away, I think, from the point your are making, and when you make it a compound sentence you often lose the reader, whether with home or business communications. You are safer with to the point short sentences.
No problem! I can help you improve your writing skills. Here's a revised version of your paragraph:
'Property law is a legal field that ensures and protects rights related to ownership, possession, and transferability of different types of property. Properties can be classified into two main categories: public property, which is owned by the government, and private property, which includes homes and businesses. Furthermore, properties can be tangible (physical objects) or intangible (such as intellectual property). English is not my first language either, so I understand the challenges of writing. Please let me know if you need any further assistance.'