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W.E.B. Du Bois. Du Bois wrote this book in order to show readers the striving in the souls of black people. He wants readers to feel the hurt, accomplishments, and losses of blacks. “Will America be poorer if she replaces her brutal dyspeptic blundering with light-hearted but determined Negro humility?”
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W.E.B. Du Bois wrote this book with the intention of illustrating the inner struggles faced by black people. His aim is to evoke in readers a sense of empathy for the pain, achievements, and setbacks experienced by the black community. In the book, Du Bois poses the question, "Would America be worse off if it were to exchange its harsh, clueless behavior for a more lighthearted but resolute attitude of humility among African Americans?"
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