At this point he did not care if he had wronged others because he has been wronged by many of whom he thought he was close to.
How can I reword this without using so many "he"? I used it five times & i'm not sure how to reword everything to make it make sense.
The essay question we had to do is to research the effects of loneliness and rejection and use references from the novel Frankenstein. How can I make my thesis or the concluding sentence of my introduction sound different from my classmates but at the same time, answer the question.
Throughout the novel, author Mary Shelley intentionally includes examples of loneliness and rejection through the characters and their actions, which psychologists concluded has caused physical, mental, and emotional problems.
To reword the sentence without using "he" multiple times, you can focus on replacing the pronoun with the subject or by using alternative phrasing. Here's a possible rewording:
"At this stage, the individual no longer cared about potentially wronging others due to being repeatedly wronged by several people they believed to be close to."