revise the following sentence to use modifiers correctly, clearly and effectively.
Original
1.The student cafeteria is operated by a college food service system chain.
Revised.
The chain of student cafeteria is operated by a college food service system
To revise the sentence while using modifiers correctly, clearly, and effectively, you can say:
"The college food service system operates a chain of student cafeterias."
Explanation of the revision:
- To make the sentence clearer and more concise, we can shift the subject "student cafeteria" to follow the modifier "chain."
- The modifier "chain of student cafeterias" now describes what the college food service system operates, rather than describing the cafeteria itself.
- By rearranging the sentence, we effectively communicate that the college food service system is responsible for operating multiple student cafeterias.
What is a "chain of student cafeteria"?
A chain of student cafeteria sounds wrong.
Revised..
The student cafeteria is operated by a chain of college food service system.
Did I put the modifier to the right place?