revise the following sentence to use modifiers correctly, clearly and effectively. *= revised sentence

Question

revise the following sentence to use modifiers correctly, clearly and effectively. *= revised sentence

1.The student cafeteria is operated by a college food service system chain.
* A chain of food service system operates the student cafeteria.

Thank you

Answer 1

You left out the word "college" in your revision. And does the entire chain operate the cafeteria? I did a double-take reading it the way you have written it. Is there a better way?

Answer 2

I'll check back later this evening to see what you come up with. :) It's dinner time on the west coast where I am.

Answer 3

OK,here is the revision.I think this makes more sense.

The college food service system operates a chain of student cafeteria.

Answer 4

This looks good -- except for the last word.

Answer 5

Ok Thank you.

Answer 6

revise the following sentence to use modifiers correctly, clearly and effectively. *= revised sentence

You left out the word "college" in your revision. And does the entire chain operate the cafeteria? I did a double-take reading it the way you have written it. Is there a better way?

I'll check back later this evening to see what you come up with. :) It's dinner time on the west coast where I am.

OK,here is the revision.I think this makes more sense.

This looks good -- except for the last word.

Ok Thank you.

The revised sentence is: "A chain of food service systems operates the student cafeteria."