Question

Is this sentence correct using a subordinator conjunction

Her name is Delores Watson while the donor is very generous
or is this correct
Whereas the donor is very generous, her name is Delores Watson.

Answer 1

This is out of context, so it makes no sense as it stands. I think the second is a better way to write it in any case, since there is no obvious connection between her name and a generous donor or why her name should be in question.