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Which of the following options best demonstrates sentence fluency?
a. The city looked beautiful in that it was lit by the sun while I was walking down the street.
b. Walking down the street in the sunshine, the city looked beautiful.
c. The city looked beautiful as I was walking, lit by the sun, down the street.
d. Walking down the street, I noticed how beautiful the city looked in the sunshine.

Answer is C???

  1. Writeacher

    Not C.

  2. Writeacher

    Ask yourself which one makes sense ...

    1. Did the sun light up the city while you were walking ... ?
    2. Was the city "walking down the street"?
    3. Was your walking "lit by the sun, down the street"?
    4. Was "I" walking down the street ... ?

  3. Anonymous

    A

  4. Anonymous

    I am not sure

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