This is still vague to me. What are these "essential life skills"? If you list some (and make them specific), I'll help you work them in.

• Re-write:
Through their difficult times in college, students will be armed with perseverance and determination which allow them to cope with other plights.

You haven't answered Ms. Sue's questions?

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