I had to read this paragraph to see if there was any puncuation and grammar mistakes and also with the content and correct citations. I found that the person used "this" which is not appropriate because the reader doesn't what "this" is. There seems to be run-ons as well.

What else is wrong with this paragraph?

Orwell expresses the question that is unknown to all in source G. Is one ever alone? The government is always watching every person's move, where they go, who they talk to, and their schedules. There is a reason behind this, but for now, privacy means nothing anymore. The civilization is being taken over by technology and is taking away freedom by always watching its inhabitants. No one knows when or where there are cameras, tracking devices, microphones, and so on. By this, the government is taking away peoples freedom and their ability to do as they please. On certain levels this does help society but like Orwell states, "have not only the right opinions but the right instincts." There are different opinions as to what is considered right and then wrong. People know what choices they make and they have to live with their actions and consequences. By developing these technological advances one hopes that they can decrease on the wrongs happening, even if it means that they are wronging themselves.

Based on the information provided, here are the mistakes and issues found in the paragraph:

1. Lack of punctuation: The paragraph contains some missing punctuation marks, making it difficult to read smoothly. Make sure to add appropriate punctuation marks such as commas and periods to improve clarity and readability.

2. Lack of proper capitalization: Proper nouns, such as "Orwell" and the first word of each sentence, should be capitalized.

3. Lack of clarity and coherence: The paragraph lacks clear transitions between different ideas, resulting in fragmented sentences and a lack of overall cohesion. It could be beneficial to reorganize and present the ideas in a logical sequence.

4. Lack of citation: The statement "Orwell expresses the question that is unknown to all in source G" implies that the paragraph is referencing a specific source (source G). It is important to provide the proper citation to give credit and support the ideas being discussed.

To improve the paragraph, address these issues by:

1. Adding missing punctuation marks to enhance clarity and readability.

2. Ensuring proper capitalization of proper nouns and the beginning of each sentence.

3. Reorganizing the ideas in a logical sequence, adding necessary transitions, and connecting the sentences to create a more coherent paragraph.

4. Including proper citations to acknowledge the source of the ideas or information being discussed.