I have to write a thematic essay and a characteristic essay. I have a few questions in the writing. I am in grade 11 right now.
1) what should I include in the introduction? Whenever I write anything about the story, my tutor says that is summarizing and I should not do that since the reader knows the story. Whenever I try to introduce with a few words what the next few paragraphs are about, my tutor says it is too repetitive since the readers will know soon anyways. So, what should I put in the introduction because my introductions are so short now.
2) what should I include in the body paragraphs? I usually use three quotes to support my points. However, whenever I try to say anything about what happened in the story, my tutor says it's summarizing and I should not do that. And since it's a thematic or character essay, my tutor tells me not to write my opinions or too much off topic. Then, what should I write in the paragraphs.
- since in grade 11, essays are suppose to be 600-1000 words or more. What am I suppose to write in general? There is so much that I shouldn't write, what should I write then, like just in general?
1. Plan (don't start writing yet) your body paragraphs first.
2. Be sure each body paragraph has a main idea, not simply what comes next in the story.
3. Make sure the order of your body paragraphs is NOT in the chronological order of the story.
4. Write your intro AFTER you have all the body paragraphs written and edited.
5. Write your conclusion last.
PS - A paper about how a character changes during a story almost guarantees chronological order! Avoid those kinds of papers!!
Writing essays can be challenging, but I'll do my best to guide you. Let's break down your questions one by one:
1) Introduction: Your tutor is right that you should avoid summarizing the story in your introduction. Instead, start with a strong opening sentence or a hook that grabs the reader's attention. You can use a quote, a thought-provoking question, or an interesting fact related to your essay's theme or character. Then, provide some background information about the story or the character you are analyzing. This can be a brief context or any relevant details that will help the reader understand the main ideas you will discuss in the body paragraphs.
2) Body Paragraphs: In each body paragraph, focus on developing a specific point or theme related to your essay's objective. Rather than summarizing the story, analyze specific aspects of the theme or character you are exploring. Use examples or quotes from the text to support your analysis and provide evidence for your claims. Ensure that each paragraph has a clear topic sentence that introduces the point you will discuss. Then, elaborate on that point, analyze the examples you provide, and explain how they relate to your overall argument.
Instead of simply stating what happened in the story, focus on explaining why it happened or the impact it has on the theme or character you are analyzing. Consider the deeper meaning, symbolism, or literary techniques used in the text. This will provide a more insightful analysis rather than a mere summary.
3) Length and Content: Since you mentioned a word count requirement, it's important to ensure that you have enough content to meet that requirement. Focus on developing your points and ideas fully. Each body paragraph should explore a different aspect of the theme or character, providing analysis and evidence. Additionally, you can consider including counterarguments or addressing potential objections to strengthen your essay further.
Avoid going off-topic or including your personal opinions unless it is explicitly asked for in the assignment guidelines. While it's crucial to substantiate your claims and analysis, ensure that you stay focused on the theme or character you are writing about.
Remember to always consult with your tutor or teacher for specific guidelines and expectations they have for the essay. They will be able to provide you with more personalized guidance and support.
Good luck with your essays!